I'd say the best part of the cartoon was that it actually made my Xbox turn on when Jeff said "Xbox on" haha! It was good cartoon man! Good quick little story and funny in the right areas! Good stuff Zac!
I'd say the best part of the cartoon was that it actually made my Xbox turn on when Jeff said "Xbox on" haha! It was good cartoon man! Good quick little story and funny in the right areas! Good stuff Zac!
Now this is an animation. The artwork, flow, color scheme, and story all flow perfectly together to create a true masterpiece. I loved the entire style of this animation, especially the characters. The development of the characters draws you in the entire time. I also found that to be a strong point of the animation, you didn't need voice actors to explain the story, you could easily understand what was going on in the characters' minds. I'm very intrigued in what happens next in the series and I hope you're able to get the series funded! Keep up the terrific work!
-LeVi
The animation is great, I'll give you that. The flow and color schemes worked well together for sure. However, I feel like the gang tries way too hard to be funny. Also, the story jumps around too much and really isn't all that funny. You need to remember that what may be funny to you may not be funny to others. The delivery of lines and jokes was very bland and non comical to me. The delivery of lines by each character had an essence of monotone in it, not a lot of enthusiasm. An improvement on voice acting can easily bump up the quality. The effort was definitely good man, keep working at it!
I'm surprised your video received 4th place on the daily voting. The video was well written and the joke is relatable to anyone who has encountered customer service. You had me chuckling throughout the entire video. People may dock you on the animation, but I figured that's your style and I feel like it fit the style of the joke perfectly. Keep at it man, this was some good work!
-LeVi
Thanks! If anyone wants to dock me on the animation, I wouldn't argue. Everything is a work-in-progress!
These cartoons aren't the same as they used to be, it seems like there's no effort anymore. I would stop with this series and try something new. You're running this series into the ground.
Hands down the funniest thing you've created Mick. I was dying the entire time! Good stuff sir!
good stuff man! i can see you put a good amount of time into this one! The audio was much better and animation was smooth! Can't wait to get episode 3 started!
Thanks Levi! :D
Don't forget that I'm still waiting for you fighting voice clips >:C
I definitely enjoyed it Sommy! I didn't realize you were uploading it so soon! I liked the animation, it flowed smoothly and meshed with the voices pretty well! the music fit perfectly and was catchy! It made me chuckle too even though I knew what was happening. Good job! Cheers!
-Corey
I'm a fast animator XD
and Thanks a bunch <3 I hope to do more project with you in the future.
Man of many voices! Creator of the Newgrounds Voice Acting Collaboration and Voice of Bob Velseb in Spooky Month! Always willing to lend a voice in your animation, game or spoken word project! Thanks for stopping by!
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